Tuesday, 29 April 2014

Quick Write- Eden

My Eden. I haven't really thought about what it would be, but I suppose it would have to be big. Expansive actually, a place that is seemingly endless and every step you discover something new, something extraordinary. And right in the middle, because you'd eventually want to return somewhere familiar, there'd be a house. A small one story house, but as you stepped in it the floor would drop out and you'd see that it was several stories underground. You'd have two options to descend and ascend, and that'd be an elevator or you could climb. At the bottom there would be a room so big you'd think you were in a mansion, and in that room would be everything you need to live. From food to clothes. Now right now I've painted a picture that shows an individual in their house, but there would be millions of people all with their own houses and everyone would have their needs met. No government, because I think that it's a bit of a stupid policy, but everyone lived by a set of rules that were essentially common sense, and everyone policed their own issues. It would be nice.


  1. I like your idea of an endless world with countless possibilities. Very unique way of looking at this assignment.

  2. I enjoy the idea of this. I could really visualize what you were saying and it seems so cool! When I was reading about the house, I wasn't expecting for you to say that it would continue underground. What made you decided to do that? I wish that were a real thing.

  3. I think it's pretty cool that you have everything as an adventure and surprise in your Eden. Everything's surprising and interesting, yet it's all familiar.